Hi Ida, I love your writing on Cockatoo's. What else could you tell me about Cockatoo's? I love how you have chosen a vibrant background to make your work stand out. It would be great to see you use bigger text next time so that it stands out more. Also, maybe you could choose a different colour for the title as it is hard to read. Great work!
Hi Ida, I love your writing on Cockatoo's. What else could you tell me about Cockatoo's? I love how you have chosen a vibrant background to make your work stand out. It would be great to see you use bigger text next time so that it stands out more. Also, maybe you could choose a different colour for the title as it is hard to read. Great work!
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